Upon looking back at our website, one of my peers discussed all the feedback we got for our group’s website. The response was quite varied as we had made sufficient progress, as some things still had to be thought about and amended.
In looking at what we needed to adjust on our website, my peer and I reflected on aspects of the website we really liked and those which we could amend. We further took up our skills tutors advice by looking at various tv magazine programme websites. For example, the website for the daytime talk show “Ellen” is very crisp and white. Now upon getting feedback a flaw of our website was that it was white on black when our skills instructor (for tv websites) pointed out that this should be changed. She said that it would be better for us to have our writing on a white background. Now although we fully appreciated her feedback we decided to keep our background and font colour, but add in some boxes (skills instructor suggestion).
The reason for this was because our show would air in the night, thus having text on a black background would reflect not only our theme of cocktails but also our time slot too. However, we felt that the suggestion of boxes could work, considering feedback was given on the width of our fonts and also the text boxes. Seeing that the writing could sometimes prove difficult to read thus had to stand out more in order to garner more attention. Finally, I thought of making the synopsis of our show more clear on our website, using a neat border or box to highlight
However, we felt that the suggestion of boxes could work, considering feedback was given on the width of our fonts and also the text boxes. Seeing that the writing could sometimes prove difficult to read thus had to stand out more in order to garner more attention. Finally, I thought of making the synopsis of our show more clear on our website, using a neat border or box to highlight all of the content of our show straight away to our audiences eye. Further thinking about amending synopsis passage as further feedback from instructor/lecturer(s) proved that we were quite vague on our website about our show.
After we’d re-thought our website amendments, we decided that it would be best to keep both pieces of feedback at hand upon editing a final draft of our website:
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After we spoke about our website, I decided to add to my groups show channel. This meant uploading all our VT’s whilst writing a short bio in the description box. Within this particular textbox I made sure to outline our target audience, whilst subtly including that our show was a night time cocktail show, one which doesn’t promote drinking to those underage etc.
Official Channel:
The Grand Bizarre (Channel)
Screen grabs
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May 16th
After making more amendments to our website, my peer and I met up to continue work on the whole site. To start off with we changed the logo layout, whilst also opting to put our social media integration at the top of our website. We then decided to elaborate on our shows synopsis (responding on the advice given by our lecturer Mez). After this was done we added more videos to our official channel and started to embed them into our site. A white line was also inserted for our site map, in order to provide central navigation. this was so the letters/font style wouldn’t get un-noticed behind the black. Thus acted as a focal point, in order for our viewers to see the tabs upon first inspection.
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May 17th
Yesterday my peer re-sent a link to our website to one of our lecturers Mez. Her latest feedback was as follows:
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Upon reading her feedback I re-visited our website to see all the amendments me, Sophie and Dana had done over the last couple of weeks. Below is what our official website looks like now (with a link attached):
The Grand Bizarre (Official Website)
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Furthermore upon inspecting my group’s website, I realised that I’d go over the whole website by it’s tabs, in my other role of ‘copy editor’. Thus in this way I’d look over grammar, punctuation and spelling. Further paying close attention to the names of individuals, places and so forth and of course the use of commas and full stops too alongside my co. copy editor Dana Chis.
May 18th
Today me and my peer checked into our last feedback session with one of our lecturers (Skills). This is where we showed her our progress and managed to receive her feedback on some of the amendments we made. Upon doing so, she found that our latest layout was very fluid and consistent. However, she pointed out that the background could be amended. For example, an image could be edited in, for it to be placed in the background (i.e galaxy constellation). Further suggesting that we place the image in the corner of our site for it to gradually disperse into different colours. Further making sure that all the text stays visible with the background present.
Upon finding an image we were briefed very quickly on creative commons license. This was important for us as it outlines the usability of each photo under copyright law. Thus, we opted to source a background image (for our use) from flickr.com further amending search my ticking ‘no known copyright restrictions’ under licence. Thus, in this way, we made sure to not only abide by copyright laws but also to not use anybody else’s work and publish it as our own as this would be unfair to both parties (regarding the effects and so forth).
After this was done my peer and I contacted one of our group members to assist in background designing:
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This then prompted me to act on Mez’s (lecturer) advice by adding in our own quotes to our websites ‘meet the team gallery’ (see below of before and after screen grabs):
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Going back to our websites background, our team member Liam really created some impressive stuff. After sending him the image, he managed to edit it and construct his own version of it. Below are the first edits along with the final one.
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Upon sharing Liam’s work for our background, my peers and I were very impressed with the visuals. However upon closer inspection we realised the colours to be a bit too much, thus suggested a plain black background (like before instead), for which Liam amended for us.
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After seeing the amendments Liam made, all of us liked the visuals more in this particular layout. Although upon looking on each tab we realised that it was all a bit too ‘out of space-galaxy centred’. Therefore, could mislead audiences as to what ‘The Grand Bizarre’ is really about. This led us to think of alternatives such as using the stars in the corner as our background, or as my peer Sophie suggested creating small martini glass graphics surrounded by glistening stars. Which would not only represent our theme but would also spruce up our site a little more by adding more depth to our background.
To conclude, myself Dana and Sophie decided collaboratively that purple stars would work better on our site, considering the cocktail glasses may run into format issues upon it being viewed on smartphones and smaller screens. Thus, we felt the stars would not only add a touch of glamour but also keep things subtle yet eye-catching, further remaining in the right position on smaller devices.
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As you can see from the latest screen grabs, our site now looks more polished and neat. Personally, the latest edit of the background looks much more subtle and eye catching, further drawing attention to our main logo. Therefore, I can say that this version of our website is the best edit yet as we worked off all our feedback from our lecturers. Whilst further relying on other team members (such as Liam) to help us with the graphics of our site.
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